She is such a great model, and I like how she appears to be crawling toward you with her fingers in the sand! The lighting is warm and wonderful, though having a reflector on the left would fill in the shadows nicely while still keeping the natural feel for the shot.
The angle of the head, the slightly windblown hair and the position of the arms are all great. The feet seem a bit awkward though- as though though they were not supposed to be there. How could this best be solved? Not by hiding them, as she might look like she was standing in a hole. Perhaps angled to the side slightly?
The angle of the head, the slightly windblown hair and the position of the arms are all great. The feet seem a bit awkward though- as though though they were not supposed to be there. How could this best be solved? Not by hiding them, as she might look like she was standing in a hole. Perhaps angled to the side slightly?
Overall though- great work!
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