Okay, i love the pic from the model's waist up..she is a woman of great beauty no doubt but you ruined the grace of the shot with the blue shirts thingy. How about doimg a reverse color scheme on bottom?pale green panties or swim bottoms with a sheer black skirt. Even though glamour potraits have no limit in the amount of skin they show (which is usually a fair amount) you showed too much..it doesnt entice me to look at it and delve into the picture. And guys who will look at it will pass over it and be like."yeah shes hot" rather than taking time to imagine the clothes off (what every guy does when he sees a covered girl) and be more responsive. And say "shes gorgeous" "this photo is amazing" etc