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October 14, 2013
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Hana - blue lingerie pose 1 by wildplaces Hana - blue lingerie pose 1 by wildplaces
Gorgeous Hana
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Excellent color and focus, your technique is great, composition is nice - somewhat above shooting downward is nice - the tree growing out of her head is the only drawback - slight shift left or right to offset the subject could've fixed.
I would like to have seen a bit more depth of field - you could've even handled it in post, but it would certainly have made your subject much stronger. I always taught to get something in between you and your subject - a sapling, a branch with leaves, a stalk of wheat... out of focus in the foreground - it's a change of pace from the traditional out-of-focus background.
She's a stunner - you captured a magnificent pose and expression which is why I gave you five stars for impact! You obviously know how to direct your models!
Overall this is a great shot but not anything too far away from your comfort zone - I've been watching you for a long time and I absolutely love your work - you are very talented and I admire your portfolio. How about though a foret into some unusual composition styles, something unique, low shooting high, high shooting low, pushing your envelope toward something new. Love your work!
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TheElectrifyingOneHD Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
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davincipoppalag Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
gorgeous
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GabrielBB Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
Beautiful, sweet, pretty girl
Hugs and kisses
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