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Ingrid - cape 1 by wildplaces Ingrid - cape 1 by wildplaces
Lovely dreamy Ingrid
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Eidolon1 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nice
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ButterBallsXe Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2007
This one is good too.
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EMR-Thief Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2007   Photographer
good shot and angle not a very attractive background a stronger flash and a faster shutter would have brought more of the sky out
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:iconwildplaces:
wildplaces Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2007
Again I used no flash. . . Maybe I should have.
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:icontysonius:
tysonius Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007
Nice shot of Ingrid--quite attractive, and uses good poses. I love her top--very colorful, and goes well with her shorts.

I like the seaside setting, and that it's all out of focus, so as to keep the focus on her.

One thing that might work well with this image is to use a dark frame, rather than the white with the thin black border. Since her clothing and even her skin is comparatively dark compared to the sky, you might get a better overall effect.
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:iconwildplaces:
wildplaces Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2007
I always wonder about frames. I'm sure I make the wrong decision pretty often.
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:icontysonius:
tysonius Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2007
The first time it really occurred to me was when posting pics in my gallery; w/o a frame, the dA page seemed to just bleed the color out of the pictures. About that time I noticed what others were doing (including you), and started using them. I like what you've done with your frames for sunsets, with the black frame and border in a color that looks as if it was sampled from the sky in the photo--really adds to the image.
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:iconwildplaces:
wildplaces Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2007
usually do that sampling with sunsets. . . But sometimes - particularly if the image is fairly light - I'm reluctant to sue a black frame as it sort of drags your eyes away from the subject towards the frame. At least that's what I think.
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tysonius Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2007
Yeah, I can see that. But in this case, it seems that the subject is dark, whereas the sky is light. Also, IMO, the frame seems to add balance to the tones in an image. Anywho, just my ten cents worth. :)
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:iconwildplaces:
wildplaces Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2007
Fair enough. It's something I'm often uncertain about.
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NaujTheDragonfly Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful.
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JoanaRa Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Great pose and flow here!

But agree with the smilling part. She would look a lot prettier and the photo would work better if she was smilling here! Just say this because this is a flirtty type pose and no man would come near her with that expression! ^^;
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:iconwildplaces:
wildplaces Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007
I can see just what you mean. . . It's hard to extract those smiles.
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:iconjoanara:
JoanaRa Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
like someone else said tell a joke...i don't know... *L* I'd be a hard smile too ^^;
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:iconwildplaces:
wildplaces Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2007
I'm not a very funny person!
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:iconjoanara:
JoanaRa Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
then i don't know! ... ^^;
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davincipoppalag Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely shot with the shawl trailing back like that
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plbeaulieu Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007
Ingrid Is very Beautifull but I think she should Smile more often... She's always seems to be sad... Something like that , like she was bored... i can't tell right... !! And yes the sign in the lower are a little distracting but the pose is very great and the light too :) Great Dof too... :peace:
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:iconwildplaces:
wildplaces Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007
Thanks a lot. I had a shot at editing the sign out but couldn't manage it. . . She doesn't smile often. Few models do.
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:iconplbeaulieu:
plbeaulieu Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007
Why just few model ? it's not great for portrait ? She's Not happy ? is it natural for a model to smile ? I know nothing in portrait...
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:iconwildplaces:
wildplaces Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007
Most models think they don't look good when they smile. I always try to convince them that they do.
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:iconplbeaulieu:
plbeaulieu Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007
this is what i was thinking !! don't convince just tell her jokes She will smile !! it's so Nice a girl with smile !! I love Spontaneous portrait !! I think it's more easy to have a real emotion... isn't it ?
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Kicks01 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice model..have I've seen that shawl before? I like the dock scene, but the sign in the lower right is just a tad distracting.
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:iconwildplaces:
wildplaces Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007
I couldn;t get rid of the sign. . . Kathryn wore that cape on the mountain toip in the first shoot I did with her.
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Kicks01 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ahh yes, I remember it well. My favorite photo of your's.
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