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Nichola as Naiad in the inviting (?) waters of Yarramundi . . .

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:icondavincipoppalag:
Uh oh..you're in trouble now.. she's seen you!

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:iconwildplaces:
Noooo!!!!!!!!! I'm outa there!
:iconwarrwykk:
oooo...new fav. :-) Love the perspective on this one. And great expression on her face. Nichola, was the water getting too cold...you seem to be turning blue. :-) I'm of mixed opinion about her being wet like that. On the one hand, I think yes of course she should be wet, she's a Naiad. On the other hand, it does wreak havoc on the makeup.

Okay, one minor point as I look back at the pic. I think it might work better if you cropped the picture to just above her right elbow. First because it satisfies that whole "rule of thirds" thing. But also because for some reason, her forearm over the weeds seems to take on a strange form. Like in just that one spot her arm is starting to fade away or something. Just a bit odd. :-)

Another great one though. :-)

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:iconwildplaces:
You're very observant. Thanks so much for the critique.
:iconpinkpaint:
as far as the makeup thing goes, i didn't really wet my face on the shoot. i would lay back and wet my hair but i never really got my whole face in the water. so yeah obviously i should be wet, but don't give any thought to the possibility of makeup running because i was careful about that.

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:iconwarrwykk:
Ahhhh...that works then. :-)

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"I have been one acquainted with the night." - Robert Frost

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:icondavincipoppalag:
I think you"re too late..she's powerful!

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:iconwa11a6y-shots:
That's definately one disturbed naiad! =D

I really like this shot for some reason... :nod:

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:iconinlikenessofanangel:
Oh, Damn! You've been caught! haha.

Wow, what can I say? Other than - WHY IS THIS IN YOUR SCRAPS?!!!!!!

Perfect composition with the natural framing with the weeds and the tree. The only distracting element to my eye is that half circle (looks like another weed or a stick) at the left side of the image in the middle.

Bravo!

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